Thread:Runwaygirl20/@comment-25035749-20150910173139/@comment-25035749-20150911161548

Hey Runwaygirl maybe you can take a look at Enter the Ninja part 1 and figure out what I did wrong because I can't find, anything wrong with it and people in the PR: Fanfiction writer forum says that I've got grammar problems and other stuff wrong and I can't see that.