Thread:Thantosiet/@comment-26534756-20140719152403/@comment-5737527-20140722185256

Calm down. I don't mean any of this personally. She is not you; you're ten times more interesting and creative.

Here are my reasons why she's bad:

1. Her personality. She doesn't have one, she just does whatever the plot needs her to do.

2. Her affect on the other characters. They all suddenly start caring about her for no reason, so their personalities become more boring.

3. Her relationships. Instead of having to earn the respect and friendship of everyone else, she's just made an extra sibling and Ranger right from the beginning, and everyone already loves her. Struggle is ten times more fun to read.

4. Her romances. Neither she nor the guy (usually Carter) does anything to interest the other, they're just in love. That is not interesting to read.

5. Her stories. She keeps coming back over and over, and she doesn't ever change or get more interesting.