Thread:Thantosiet/@comment-37405-20141002183620/@comment-5737527-20141003013940

Now, I should note that including Alpha more frequently, or even making him a central character, isn't the problem I have here. The problem I have is that it feels contrived, that he has to be super-special in order to get the spotlight, have all of the other good guys love him and all the bad guys obsessed with him, force him into the plot in a dramatic way that is just generic instead of fitting his virtues, talents and flaws, and so on.