Thread:Kamenrider2011/@comment-34766826-20180831175406/@comment-5182997-20180901032325

Your series has a great premise,and a unique take on the whole "robots and viruses take over the world" by adding Mother Nature as a villain. I like her in particular. Me personally, I'd write her as the main villain rather than S.P.I.D.A.V. Meidrone in particular is interesting, as he is based on the things that scared you were young. He could work as a kind of Vagabound character, and can easily be written in and out of your story as you see fit.

S.P.I.D.A.V seems to be less of a character, and more of a plot device, but I think it fits better with your premise. If I were writing Cyber Warriors, I'd actually make him the FIRST villain the rangers fight and defeat. Kind of shock value idea, and have his defeat create Morpheus or something. Because Sceleon is the only one who survives, I'd giver her any roles that S.P.I.D.A.V had.

As for the Rangers, Thea is the best one. Jack and Casey are similar in that they are brooding bad boys. I'd change one of them around. Probably Casey. I feel like Jack could be a really great character a a rival to Mother Nature. Both are children of Cronex Corp to a degree, and a Cain and Abel story could be really cool.

You have a really good premise, and it's easily one of the best iI've seen on the wiki. With a little reworking, it can contend with the Omniverses of the wiki.